Is This A good Persuasive essay? What grade would i deserve?

Is there life after death? This question has been asked since the dawn of civilization. It is arguably the most important and most personal question that can be asked in light of the realization of one's own mortality. Immortality is a complex issue dependent on several other philosophical questions which need to be addressed. There are several reasons to be against immortaility such as, no social life which means you cannot keep your information like address or social security. You can't experience aging. The last reason to be against immortality is that you will lose all of your loved ones. In these papagraphs i will give examples and reasons not to become immortal. One of the major reasons not to become immortal is because you have to keep it a secret. It would be really weird if you lived in one place for at least 10 years and not changed at all. You also would not be able to keep friends for very long due to the constant moving . Although it may seem good to never die,but it would'nt be great to always be moving,new jobs,new friends, and have to act suspicous. Another important reason is because you can't age. Even though it seems so cool, it won't be cool when you can't do certain things like drive. If you are 12 or 13 you really won't have any freedom to vote . If you can't age you'll never see what you look like as an adult. I think that it would really stink because you'll never grow . The Final Reason to strongly be against immortality is because you will lose all of your loved ones.If you are the only person to drink the water,your loved ones will all die eventually. In the story the tuck family's cat does not drink the water and it dies.Thi proves that it would not be worth being alone without anyone you know and love. It would really upset certain people's religion if they never got to see god.